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Reporting back to active duty for "infantry training" after my ten-day leave following graduation from Parris Island, I really didn't know what to expect, but whatever it was, it was nothing like this.

I and a group of other freshly-minted Marines stood at attention in a small formation on the concrete outside our barracks. There was a pile in front of each of us, consisting of the carefully packed contents of our seabags, which we had been ordered to dump on the "deck" to be inspected. Now, the team of sergeants in charge of our training was picking through our belongings, making the occasional disparaging remark about this or that personal item and tossing "contraband" articles into a garbage can.

It was almost like being back in boot camp, though as we soon learned, there were some major differences.

Perhaps the greatest difference was in the routine at the end of the day, when a training sergeant came by to inspect us before allowing us to "mount" our "racks"—climb into our beds, in civilian-speak—and get some sleep. The way it worked in infantry training, a sergeant would come by at the appointed hour and look in through the window set in the door at the entrance to the squadbay to see if everyone was standing at attention in front of his rack. If so, he would enter, inspect us, give the order to "mount," turn off the lights, and leave. However, if even one of us was not standing at attention, the sergeant would enter, wonder aloud as to why the platoon wasn't ready to go to sleep, and then leave. Depending on his mood, he would return after a few minutes, or in half an hour, and the scene would play out again.

As a result, while eight hours of sleep had been pretty much the rule in boot camp, it had become the exception during infantry training, and in our platoon, much of our lost sleep was attributable to a fellow named Murdoch, who well and truly didn't care to "get with the program."

After the sergeant had put off inspecting us a number of times over the first few days of training because Murdoch couldn't be troubled to remain at attention on his own for longer than a few seconds, one of the Marines who stood across the aisle from Murdoch—I forget his name—tried to reason with him, but Murdoch wasn't having any.

"Get screwed, man," he said. "I'm not letting any sergeant tell me what to do on my own time."

"But it's not your own time," said his antagonist. "And some of us would like to get some shuteye, y'know? Is it too much to ask for you to stand at attention for a few minutes?"

"You gonna make me?" asked Murdoch. "You try, and I'll toss you into the next county." None of us doubted that Murdoch could make good on his claim, as he was easily the largest and physically fittest man in the platoon, and he intimidated those around him with his mere presence. If memory serves, we got to bed at a little past midnight that night. Reveille was, as always, at 5 am.

On the first Sunday afternoon of infantry training, the duty training sergeant had our platoon assemble behind the barracks building. He carried with him two pairs of boxing gloves.

"I expect that by now, some friction may have developed between some of you Marines, so we're going to work that out right now," announced the sergeant, who then held up the gloves. "Anybody here want to challenge anyone else to a little friendly sparring session?" A wicked grin flashed across his face.

"Yo!" cried Murdoch, and stepped up to the sergeant. "I'd like to go up against him," he said, pointing to his critic from across the aisle. "I've had all the ragging I can stand from him." The sergeant tossed the second pair of gloves to Murdoch's intended victim, and after both men were gloved, the fight began.

Murdoch moved easily, despite his size, and knocked his opponent down with one punch. His victim got up, the fight resumed, and Murdoch knocked his opponent down again. After two more knockdowns, the sergeant stepped in, announced the fight was over, and asked if anyone wanted to challenge the winner.

"I will!" said a voice that belonged to Vega, the only Marine in the platoon who had been in my recruit training platoon on Parris Island. What he lacked in size he made up for in spirit, for I had seen him beat recruits almost twice his size during pugil stick training. I also knew he didn't like bullies.

Vega donned the gloves and he and Murdoch went at it. Vega got some good shots in, but Murdoch seemed unaffected, and he managed to knock Vega down a number of times until the sergeant stepped in again and asked for a new fighter.

Inspired by Vega's action, I help up my hand, which was not a particularly good idea because frankly, I knew about as much about fighting with my fists as most people know about Einstein's theory of relativity. After donning the gloves, Murdoch and I circled for a while, exchanged a few jabs, and then he hit me, once. I saw stars and fell down, hard. The sergeant called for a new fighter, and one stepped forward.

Murdoch was having a really good time, knocking us down, one after another, and I don't think it ever dawned on him that there was no shortage of volunteers who wanted to take a shot at him for having robbed us of so much sleep.

Murdoch eventually tired, to the point where he got knocked down a few times. This time, however, when the sergeant asked for a new fighter, the next volunteer announced he wanted to challenge Murdoch instead of the winner. The sergeant motioned the winner to take off his gloves.

"W-wait! I don't get it," spluttered Murdoch, "I'm the one who lost! Shouldn't…"

"This ain't 'challenge the winner'," said the sergeant. "It's 'challenge anyone you want'. You want to get some rest, you can, if someone will volunteer to take your place." The sergeant turned to the rest of us. "Anyone want to put on Murdoch's gloves, so he can catch his breath?"

Nobody said a word.

"I suppose you could just refuse the challenge and just quit…" began the sergeant, but Murdoch shook his head.

"Nah," he said. "I'll fight."

Over the course of the ensuing matches, Murdoch was able to score some points and get in a few knockdowns, but the tide had turned dramatically, and more often than not, it was Murdoch who found himself getting back up, albeit more slowly as time went on. The sergeant kept asking if anyone wanted to don Murdoch's gloves, but there were no takers, and Murdoch wouldn't quit. And so the afternoon dragged on, while Murdoch literally fought everyone in the platoon.

That night, as it turned out, the sergeant visited our squadbay only once, after finding everyone—including Murdoch—standing at attention in anticipation of his arrival.

Date: 2014-11-26 06:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] fodschwazzle.livejournal.com
It sounds like the sergeant was pretty fed up with Murdoch's crap as well. Was it usually the same sergeant checking the marines at attention as in the morning? What an ingenious team-building exercise!

I really enjoyed reading this.

Date: 2014-11-26 01:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexpgp.livejournal.com
My understanding is that most of the IT platoons had similar Sunday afternoons, not so much to punish any particular individuals as to provide a way for a bunch of healthy and physically fit young men that had undergone sudden stress (by being re-exposed to an environment that felt a lot like boot camp) to release their tensions and perceived animosities during a supervised sports activity.

The sergeants spelled each other for duties such as this. During the day, however, all three would be out and about, making our lives miserable. :^)

I'm glad you liked the piece.

Cheers...

Date: 2014-11-26 05:18 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bleodswean.livejournal.com
Brilliant. Another perfect piece of writing.

Date: 2014-11-28 03:08 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexpgp.livejournal.com
Thank you for the compliment!

Cheers...

Date: 2014-11-27 08:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] i-17bingo.livejournal.com
Nobody said a word.

This was so, so satisfying. But still, the power that Murdoch wielded over everybody, even when everybody was against him, was frustrating.

I'm Team Vega: I so hate bullies.

Date: 2014-11-28 03:10 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexpgp.livejournal.com
Frustrating, yes, but not insurmountable.

I'm glad you liked the piece.

Cheers...

Date: 2014-11-27 02:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] eternal-ot.livejournal.com
I kind of secretly enjoyed Murdoch getting knocked down and the unity everyone showed. Way to go!

Date: 2014-11-28 03:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexpgp.livejournal.com
It was an interesting moment where things "came together" on the fly, that's for sure.

Cheers...

Date: 2014-11-28 07:57 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] halfshellvenus.livejournal.com
It seems as if the idea of teamwork hadn't yet dawned on Murdoch. Robbing the entire platoon of sleep night after night because he had something to prove is the kind of self-centered behavior that is aggravating as well as potentially dangerous in more serious settings.

I can imagine everyone wanting to punch him silly, and I'm glad you too your turn to try. ;)

Date: 2014-11-28 03:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexpgp.livejournal.com
You hit the nail on the head.

Punishing a group for the sins of individuals that are part of that group is a time-honored way of generating a dynamic within the group to fix problems. It's not a foolproof method, of course, and it is not necessarily "honorable" (here I have in mind the punishment meted out to Roman cohorts that gave us the word "decimate," though even here, I suppose it depends on one's definition of "honorable," but I digress...).

It was certainly an interesting team-building exercise, that's for sure!

Cheers...

Date: 2014-12-02 12:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cheshire23.livejournal.com
Yes, and perhaps more effective than many of the exercises that pass for such in the corporate workplace.

Date: 2014-11-28 04:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tonithegreat.livejournal.com
It's amazing how many people there are who spend a lot of energy fighting everyone in the platoon every day. This was a very enjoyable read.

Date: 2014-11-29 12:19 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexpgp.livejournal.com
Interesting observation.

I'm glad you liked the piece.

Cheers...

Date: 2014-11-29 09:07 am (UTC)
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From: [personal profile] jexia
Nice work, I enjoyed this.

Date: 2014-12-02 12:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexpgp.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked this piece.

Cheers...

Date: 2014-11-29 05:16 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dmousey.livejournal.com
Perfect! :)

Date: 2014-12-02 12:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexpgp.livejournal.com
The story does have a certain... closure, that's for sure!

Cheers...

Date: 2014-11-30 02:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] suesniffsglue.livejournal.com
Nice work! It was such a relief when the sergeant came in with a dose of lesson for Murdoch. I like your style with dialogue.

Date: 2014-12-02 12:31 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexpgp.livejournal.com
Not sure it was for Murdoch in particular, but for us in general, as many of us were full of vigor and vinegar.

Thanks for the kind words.

Cheers...

Date: 2014-11-30 05:37 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] theun4givables.livejournal.com
I love it when a group comes together to get their revenge. ;) I am not at all surprised Murdoch fell in line, after that!

Date: 2014-12-02 12:34 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexpgp.livejournal.com
I actually recall the spontaneity of having what started out as just a bunch of people wanting some payback into a semi-organized gauntlet to achieve an end.

I also suspect the sergeant was making up the rules as things progressed. :^)

Cheers...

Date: 2014-12-01 06:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] roina-arwen.livejournal.com
It's good to know that Murdoch eventually learned his lesson!

Date: 2014-12-02 12:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexpgp.livejournal.com
If memory serves, he actually turned out to be a regular guy.

But you are absolutely right! :^)

Cheers...

Date: 2014-12-01 07:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jem0000000.livejournal.com
Nice. :) Sounds like Murdoch learned his lesson.

Date: 2014-12-02 12:52 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexpgp.livejournal.com
He apparently did. :^)

Thanks for reading!

Cheers...

Date: 2014-12-01 11:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] watching-ships.livejournal.com
Thoroughly enjoyed this. I love getting a glimpse into a world I know very little about.

Date: 2014-12-02 12:53 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alexpgp.livejournal.com
I'm glad you liked it!

Cheers...

Date: 2014-12-02 06:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] crisp-sobriety.livejournal.com
This was a very enjoyable read!

Date: 2014-12-02 09:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] alycewilson.livejournal.com
I was enjoying the story but wondering how it fit the topic until it ended and I figured it out. Nice twist! He put himself through the gauntlet.

Date: 2014-12-03 01:02 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hosticle-fifer.livejournal.com
"I'm not letting any sergeant tell me what to do on my own time." Stories that start with lines like this NEVER end well.

I love boot stories, and this one was a perfect revenge story for the Gauntlet prompt.

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