I didn't stop...(revisited)

[alexpgp]

(This started out as an update to yesterday's post of shortly after 9 pm. However, I noticed a few minutes ago (around 8:30 pm) that this post had taken on a life of its own, repeating the content of the earlier post with the following updated information added. Plus this message had received its own comment. So, I've edited this entry to delete yesterday's material and include only the update. There.)

After sleeping on it, reading LJ friend brenk's comment, and giving it more thought, here's what I came up with for that horrible sentence of late yesterday:

In order to improve product quality, the work place is stocked with highly efficient powder detergents and gradients for treating water, adding softener, and giving the product a natural fresh smell.

That's as good as it's going to get, and now, I really must move on.

Cheers...

Comments

[ex-ilyavinar899.livejournal.com]

Высочайшее достижение нейтронной мегалоплазмы! Ротор поля наподобие дивергенции градуирует себя вдоль спина и там, внутре, обращает материю вопроса в спиритуальные электрические вихри, из коих и возникает синекдоха отвечания.